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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn, exciting and eventful couple of chapters!
Naru getting jealous and possessive! Keitaro finding out about the bet! And best of all, Mokoto's return!!! She's one of my favorites, so I hope you do her justice!
Can't wait to learn more about her back story in this fic. Seems like there's something going on with her, judging by the call she made to her sister at the end.
Excellent work. I look forward to more!
Naru getting jealous and possessive! Keitaro finding out about the bet! And best of all, Mokoto's return!!! She's one of my favorites, so I hope you do her justice!
Can't wait to learn more about her back story in this fic. Seems like there's something going on with her, judging by the call she made to her sister at the end.
Excellent work. I look forward to more!
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January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I'd have suggested detailing Keitaro's reaction to Kitsune's outfit in chapter 9, but this wasn't bad. Wondering exactly how you intend to make this a harem fic when so far all the action has been Kitsune and Naru.
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December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update has soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happen's in chapter 9.
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December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not a fan of the whole 'hide who I am from KEitaro' kind of deal - specifically referring to the previous chapter where Naru gets scared Keitaro's friends recognized her for her slutty ways. She is what she is, and she'd be much sexier if she owned that rather than be ashamed of it.
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December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the bit with Kitsune reflecting on her love of dancing, and how she swears to dance for Keitaro soon. Very sensual and stuff.
There's Shinobu!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
There's Shinobu!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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December 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Surprisingly deep this episode.
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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would like to know what the IOU that Kitsune was talking about. So please post some more chapter's. I can't wait to see what 8. So please update when you get a chance. I love reading what is going on. But it will be scary when Motoko come's back.
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December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters! Awesome!
Let's see, I like how Naru is taking Keitaro's feelings into account, though that bit she said to Kitsune “If you don’t know, I can’t make you understand" irked me a bit.
LOL, I love this 'Great Man Drought' Mokoto apparently caused.
Something I just noticed, but where's Shinobu? Su's here, Mokoto's out on a training camp, but Shinobu's no where to be seen.
Let's see, I like how Naru is taking Keitaro's feelings into account, though that bit she said to Kitsune “If you don’t know, I can’t make you understand" irked me a bit.
LOL, I love this 'Great Man Drought' Mokoto apparently caused.
Something I just noticed, but where's Shinobu? Su's here, Mokoto's out on a training camp, but Shinobu's no where to be seen.
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December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happen's in Chapter 6. How about you do up two chapter's and post them at the same time. I would really like to see Naru and Kitsune agrue which one is better and Keitaro get's involed by doing them both at the same time. It is only another thought. If I get anymore I will PM them to you though the forum if you have an account there. So please keep up the good work.
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December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I like the way Kitsune seduced Keitaro and particularly the part where she fantasized about what she'd do to him (or he to her).
I really like the way you portray Kitsune here.
Excellent work! I can't wait for more!
I really like the way you portray Kitsune here.
Excellent work! I can't wait for more!