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February 7, 2022 at 12:00 AM
grace? really? grace is ugly bro, lol
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February 7, 2022 at 12:00 AM
actually you could even go global in this, as in go to every region, even side regions, lol
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November 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
As long as you include an absolute chapter, I'll be happy.
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September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Kenshi, this story was made before Undertale was even officially released. Therefore, it's most likely not a reference. Besides, the whole "X or be Xed" thing existed long before Undertale was even though of.
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August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind it so much it's a decent idea to have a sexualized region, my only real issue is the 'rape or be raped' thing, if this was true it would of come up alot sooner in your characters life and feels like a very naked -pun some what intended- attempt to draw in undertale fans as it's used Very clumsily and sparingly.
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February 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope you finish this story eventually. If you don't, I may feel the need to pick up the torch.
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December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dude, excellent start. Personally I have a huge fetish for lactation and impregnation, and your first chapter was erotic as hell. The later ones were alright, but I'd personally enjoy more of a focus on intentionally impregnating as many females as you can. More milky boobs would be amazing too. Keep up the story!
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August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! Can't wait till we get som Gardevoir action going. Also awesome for incest and minors.
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not bad not bad at all. Color me intrigued. However shouldnt calem idk check with a pokecenter or some legal building for specific laws on this sort of things. I mean i wouldnt exactly trust a girl who tried to blackmail me and steal my money. Also if i may leave a suggestion. Lucario it can learn physic in the game and can talk in the anime so loophole maybe?