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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man, I'd like to see what happened to Grace after her son left, and it would be interesting if Calem meet the parents of some of his children.
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January 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great stuff so far! Looking forward to seeing sexy girl fennekin evolve!
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January 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great stuff! Really enjoying your romp through kalos so far. Keep it up!
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January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter mate. as far as the other gym battles go i would say detail them like you did this one regardless of gender. just because there probably the most important part of the game, right along with the team flare stuff. speaking of team flare i really hope you do something awesome with them.
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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
much better. this story is really getting interesting. although i have to ask, what pokemon are you considering for calem's team? and also is pokephilia illegal in your story?
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January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i like it. the sex scenes need to be drawn out a bit and you need to make the chapters significantly longer but other than that id say this is a good start