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December 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It started out so good and then felt so messy near the end. Using words like "meat", "pussy", "wetting", kind of took me away from the story, I think there are better vocab terms you could have used to make this flow a little more. At certain parts I couldn't help but laugh, especially when you wrote "splurt". LOL. I love the beginning, but I wasn't fond of the lovemaking scene. (There were a few spelling errors too).
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September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think Under the Blanket is much better~
I love the idea of a very possessive Kenshin~^^
I love the idea of a very possessive Kenshin~^^
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September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So hot, kenshin is so obsessed with his wife, so hot and steamy, I wish kenshin would go down on kaoru more and take care of her sweet flower but other than that awesome fic!
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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic!