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February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is quite brilliant and evocative. I like the way you used the line spacing to create atmosphere. It reminded me of House of Leaves a little bit.
The part in the end with Ciel always lighting the fires was so nice. I think going just a little heavier on small details like that in the descriptions would have amped the cool dark atmosphere up a notch, and made it even more amazing.
Thank you, and please keep writing!
The part in the end with Ciel always lighting the fires was so nice. I think going just a little heavier on small details like that in the descriptions would have amped the cool dark atmosphere up a notch, and made it even more amazing.
Thank you, and please keep writing!
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February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It is a disturbing and interesting tale. I wonder if there is a continuation of this or if this is the end.