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May 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I've enjoyed reading your story. It was very well-written, something I don't see often enough and I could almost picture something like this actually happening.
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October 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed this story, I wish for there had been more of it however, I feel that there was more story to tell
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February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the story, definitely left open ended would be awesome to see another couple of chapters
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December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You can be kind of hit or miss sometimes, but this was a definite hit! The details of passion are very convincing and sexy!
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March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they kinda just jumped right into that, huh?
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story, Ikuko hasn't enough attention in sailor moon fandom, just like Haruna Sakurada.
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February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Eh, not bad, but you really needed to give us some more detail about the time they spent together to sell us on there being any connection beyond physical attraction. All you did was tell us they had a good time, not actually show us. Show, don't tell! Show, don't tell! I also feel like you rushed through Minako reciprocating, Ikuko's pleasure was just rushed on through. I like this concept and I like that it could keep going, but I know you can do better.
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February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ikuko's A Fox That Needs More Stories About Her Five!