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Id rather see a man in a woman skin suit giving birth to a decomposing duck fetus wrapped in sandpaper while the man is getting analy fisted by a cactus and recieving a transvestite castration.

Seek help immediately

A good piece so far here. I'm glad to see a little bit of research here about how the champion would get away with his crimes. Most of these stories seem to forget this but you made sure it was and that only adds to its tension of the story. However as another reviewer said I too would like to see someone on Ace's tail, perhaps another champion from another region or perhaps on of the male gym leaders who has a connection with Ace. It would just a another layer to the story that I feel would show the event from both sides and add that missing bit of justice you find in crime fiction.

Really loved it :) I agree rape is wrong but in fantasy its so hot

what a great dark story im very much looking forward to future chapters

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The Serial Rapist Trainer is without a doubt one of the best Works I've read here, and you have my Complete agreement as to why you started writing this story. The length of each Chapter is simply magnicifent, so that we, as the Readers, don't have to switch between so many Chapters every other minute. The content, at least I feel so, actually have some Depth, meaning it's not just 10-20 thousand Words of outright porn.

Really love Your work and I hope and pray to every kind of deity that may or may not exist that you keep up Your good work.

I appreciate the fact that you've just been honest with yourself and gone all out with this story, getting right into the nitty-gritty of those dark, base desires. It's refreshing to see. I think we censor ourselves a lot when writing porn, toeing particular moral lines or just being hesitant to reveal certain tastes to the reading audience, even though they lie firmly in the realm of fantasy. So yeah, thanks for sharing this and I'm looking forward to what you do with the story next.

Wow, what to say. A really great fic so far, a change from the usual cute and fluffy Poképorn that I myself am guilty of writing. Hope you will continue as I'm curious as to whether Ace will get his comeuppance or what.
Also science = win!