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October 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story. I love the story line so far except for the herms, but everything else is Great!!!!!!
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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I hope you continue this fanfic!
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January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was a awesome read so far I can't wait to see what happens next. It was funny and sweat.
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November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I must say I am loving this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Also I'm hoping you haven't abandoned this amazing tale.
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October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ehhh goddammit... well I still think your story is alright, so I can overlook the futa's, as long as it's just those 2 ( Riolu & young snivy ) and not a frequent event.
Anyway I was kinda hoping to read about the state of Rend when the corruption started spreading, but I'll wait for the next chapter. So good job so far and good luck :-)
Anyway I was kinda hoping to read about the state of Rend when the corruption started spreading, but I'll wait for the next chapter. So good job so far and good luck :-)
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September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
May I just say that... I am loving this story a lot. Keep it up ;-)
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September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've been casually following this story throughout, but I must compliment you on one thing.
Training. Normally it's just skipped over, or training is addressed as the trainer having his/her team beat down on wild pokemon that try to jump them, or fights within the team. Here, we actually have some design to the training, and it doesn't necessarily require repetitive laborious training. I'm actually pretty impressed that you go out of your way for that.
Training. Normally it's just skipped over, or training is addressed as the trainer having his/her team beat down on wild pokemon that try to jump them, or fights within the team. Here, we actually have some design to the training, and it doesn't necessarily require repetitive laborious training. I'm actually pretty impressed that you go out of your way for that.
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July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As sad as it may be, I could see someone acting like this. It's so well written, minus a few spelling errors but those were rare, but it was truly a really good and dark-ish chapter. Really impressed. Good job! Looking forward to the next one!
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just read all five chapters of this. I'm really enjoying it and I can't wait for chapter 6. Anything with a female Eevee is good in my books. Then adding onto your writing style where I giggle a lot.. it makes this so much better. Keep it up!
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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am now DEFINITELY looking forward to the next chapter. Please keep it up, this is actually one of the hottest stories I've read in a while. ~Kaia Selene, WWMH~