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July 15, 2022 at 12:00 AM
I liked all of the chapters, your story rocks.
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December 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM
are you going to make a sequal?
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December 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome finale, dude! :) Still, I'm not a fan of Misty, you know... but I'm glad her stupid sisters got their comeuppance.
Also, how ironic that the lead Farmer Greyson had a terminal illness. HA! Karma, bitch!! And somehow Ash managed to use him to her advantage! Cool! Anyway, about the "no touching me, EVER!" condition... I think that Greyson was too worried with his cancer to concentrate on getting his wood worked on xD. So... GOOD RIDDANCE!
And it is good that Ash gave back the humanity to all girls there... I mean, that's so IN CHARACTER! :D Ash is a just the nicest boy... eerrr... girl around! xD
In the end, cool story! I cannot wait to read the spin-offs and know what happened to Iris, Jessie and many others. Also, What happened to Gary Oak and Delia? O_o
Good luck!
Also, how ironic that the lead Farmer Greyson had a terminal illness. HA! Karma, bitch!! And somehow Ash managed to use him to her advantage! Cool! Anyway, about the "no touching me, EVER!" condition... I think that Greyson was too worried with his cancer to concentrate on getting his wood worked on xD. So... GOOD RIDDANCE!
And it is good that Ash gave back the humanity to all girls there... I mean, that's so IN CHARACTER! :D Ash is a just the nicest boy... eerrr... girl around! xD
In the end, cool story! I cannot wait to read the spin-offs and know what happened to Iris, Jessie and many others. Also, What happened to Gary Oak and Delia? O_o
Good luck!
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November 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story! My favorite chapters were the one about Bellsprout and the last chapter.
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November 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I liked this it's a fairly good ending. Bit od a shame we didn't see Gary reacting to her totally rejecting him. Didn't he want a crack at her way back in chapter one?
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
email me or TEXT i would love to do some proof reading for your future stories. I especialy liked the pokemon breeder one with ash.
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi I am intrested in your stories and would love too do some free proofreading for you . Please email me or TEXT me. alexthechef12@gmail.com. 07580 222026 . Thanks alot.
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi I am intrested in your stories and would love too do some free proofreading for you . Please email me or TEXT me. alexthechef12@gmail.com. 07580 222026 . Thanks alot.
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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... so tjat bitchy Misty appeared at last. And she is deepest friends with Ashy-girl... well, that was a surprise for me, at least.
Too bad this is the last chapter. I cannot fathom what tipe of ending awaits for Ashy-girl... and well, I think I'll have to wait for the Spin-off to see what happens to Iris, Jessie, and other girls like Burgundy or Miette. Yeah, I love nearly all the newer girls. I doubt Zoey falls here, as she looks too much manly xD.
See you later ;P
Too bad this is the last chapter. I cannot fathom what tipe of ending awaits for Ashy-girl... and well, I think I'll have to wait for the Spin-off to see what happens to Iris, Jessie, and other girls like Burgundy or Miette. Yeah, I love nearly all the newer girls. I doubt Zoey falls here, as she looks too much manly xD.
See you later ;P
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September 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
its interesting in a fuck up way
can you do Anabel? its ok if you dont
can you do Anabel? its ok if you dont