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Don't forget the nympho pokemon Ash is carrying around with her.

I enjoyed chap 4, liked to see Ash submit. You need to proof-read your stuff, it will improve things. Overall good.

Interesting. Explicit. Somewhat gross and utterly fascinating. Your fanfiction is amazing indeed

Although... why didn't you change Ash's name into "Ashley" first? Maybe that would help me to imagine the fucking scenes better.

But anyway, I want to see other "breeders" being ravaged instead of Ash. Oh, and when you mentioned the Alpha Kangaskhan getting a "mate" that was loud and with loud stamina... Was that Misty, Serena or Dawn? xD.

I wonder if Jasmine or Iris are in the program like Ash or May. I'd love see that delicious lolis fucked hard and have some Skarmory or Druddigon eggs.

Keep up the good work! :D

make ash permanent breeder girl

rapidash breeder farm

Rapidash would be an interesting next pokemon a high ratio of male rapidash could be the reason

at first i thought this story was a little odd and i'm liking it! what i really want is for when the five years are up for her to leave Gary behind, crushing all his dreams of being with her. after all, how can he sate her needs, or even compare to the love the nindoqueen gave her?

charizard? pretty please?

How about dragon pokemon or steel types to keep with the rare theme? What happened to Ash's pokemon though?

Interesting. Fantastic. I love it! Please update!!!