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February 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Uufff estuvo genial!!! Wuauuu hasta calor me dio!!!
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January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You should continue writing this, please. I'm sure a lot of people would want you to, but not a lot of people read fics from this site.
I've been waiting for you to finish this ever since I read it. I'm sorry I didn't comment before. I just didn't know what to say without sounding desperate. lol But I don't care anymore. I'm begging you, please please continue. T-T
I've been waiting for you to finish this ever since I read it. I'm sorry I didn't comment before. I just didn't know what to say without sounding desperate. lol But I don't care anymore. I'm begging you, please please continue. T-T
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August 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HI! I'm BobV. My name in FanFiction,net is... BobV? :D
OMG! That was fantastic! All the scenes were awesome, along with the description of their fellings and sensetion. The way they brought each other to clímax was really good Hot! very hot! :D
I can't remember the last time I read good lemon Ranma. Especially Ranma/Akane.
Ranma is the one waiting for the wedding? Haha! naughty Akane. Bad, bad Akane:D
Last month I tried to translate my lemon Ranma/Akane but I didn't like the result so a put it aside.
Hope to see more soon, but this time the Full act :D
OMG! That was fantastic! All the scenes were awesome, along with the description of their fellings and sensetion. The way they brought each other to clímax was really good Hot! very hot! :D
I can't remember the last time I read good lemon Ranma. Especially Ranma/Akane.
Ranma is the one waiting for the wedding? Haha! naughty Akane. Bad, bad Akane:D
Last month I tried to translate my lemon Ranma/Akane but I didn't like the result so a put it aside.
Hope to see more soon, but this time the Full act :D
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August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I totally forgot I had an account here. Well in that case, I need to write a review for you! This is KaikiH from FanFiction[dot]net...
I thought this was a really sweet lemon. I love the display of emotions from the two characters, especially on Akane's part. I don't think any "first time" lemon would be realistic unless it showed Akane's insecurity. I think you depicted it quite well, that she knows she's actually quite physically attractive, but she's not always 100% sure she's attractive to Ranma. After all, how do you compete with all those other girls?
Waiting until marriage...is uhh...that is quite a lot of willpower. I love how it's Ranma who is enforcing that self-imposed rule, but at the end he asked if they could move up the wedding or elope. Haha! Make up your mind, Ranma!
So yeah, this was really quite sexy. The title is awesome too, because I kinda felt that way about the story itself. I really don't know when the last good Ranma/Akane lemon was written, but it's been a damn long time. So this...this was worth waiting for. :)
I do have a nitpicky thing about it the story though. I would've liked to know their state of dress (or undress) in the beginning of the story, because it helps with the visuals. At least in the beginning there should probably be mention of Ranma being shirtless and Akane being in a skirt. Also, how long have these two officially been a couple before this story happened? I guess I just like to know these things...it definitely helps with the emotional aspect of the sexual relationship, knowing how long they've been waiting to get to this point.
Eeeee...I can't wait for the wedding night story! I'm sure that'll be "worth waiting for" as well. 8D
I thought this was a really sweet lemon. I love the display of emotions from the two characters, especially on Akane's part. I don't think any "first time" lemon would be realistic unless it showed Akane's insecurity. I think you depicted it quite well, that she knows she's actually quite physically attractive, but she's not always 100% sure she's attractive to Ranma. After all, how do you compete with all those other girls?
Waiting until marriage...is uhh...that is quite a lot of willpower. I love how it's Ranma who is enforcing that self-imposed rule, but at the end he asked if they could move up the wedding or elope. Haha! Make up your mind, Ranma!
So yeah, this was really quite sexy. The title is awesome too, because I kinda felt that way about the story itself. I really don't know when the last good Ranma/Akane lemon was written, but it's been a damn long time. So this...this was worth waiting for. :)
I do have a nitpicky thing about it the story though. I would've liked to know their state of dress (or undress) in the beginning of the story, because it helps with the visuals. At least in the beginning there should probably be mention of Ranma being shirtless and Akane being in a skirt. Also, how long have these two officially been a couple before this story happened? I guess I just like to know these things...it definitely helps with the emotional aspect of the sexual relationship, knowing how long they've been waiting to get to this point.
Eeeee...I can't wait for the wedding night story! I'm sure that'll be "worth waiting for" as well. 8D