rate_review Reviews

I wouldn't mind seeing Candace with her Glaceon or finding absol Again and repaying the kindness.

This was decent, but it wasn't anywhere nearly as good as some of your other stories using Pokemon. The setup is fine, but the sex feels a little by the book, and it could have used more description of and appreciation for Absol's form...Candice really only makes mental notes of the fact that Absol has fur, and only focuses on her genitals. There's much more to Absol than just that! Think about it this way, even in your rushed stories you usually have a moment where one girl is admiring the other, doing a very barebones description of her figure, cup size, and maybe a few more characteristic traits. That shouldn't change with a story about a non-human woman. There's still plenty of aesthetically pleasing things about her, especially in the case of a Pokemon like Absol. She's a very cool and attractive looking creature! This story was alright, but you can do much better, dear.

Not Bad Five!