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September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really steamy, you do not need to edit this. I am sure Kenshin can make love to kaoru 24 hours non stop. Although kaoru might not be able to keep up with him. Kenshin fought 3 guys consecutively in one day, aoshi, soujiro and shishio. I am sure he can go lovingly fuck kaoru without any problems. I love this story.
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September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow~!
Nice~!
It's a miracle Kenji didn't wake up even with all those muffled moans~
He must be used ti it~
LOL~
Nice~!
It's a miracle Kenji didn't wake up even with all those muffled moans~
He must be used ti it~
LOL~
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September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sweetheart, THIS is the censored version? ^^ You sure you haven't just copied this last info while sending your story on some prudish page? If you can't write a full story here then I do not know where you can. ^^
Your story can be described by a universal in it's use "WOW". Really. :)There are some silly mistakes, yes. But they are so tiny and you overdid yourself to the point when little mistakes like that can be easily ignored. Besides this oneshot has 9k words of amazingly written lemon - both when it comes to details and writing style. For the love of God and all that is holy, it would be really rude to hold it against you.
But I can't stop myself and congratulate Kenshin his stamina. I mean, seriously. I was impressed you had managed to describe his personality so well and that all this urge to prove his ownership on her was an amazing thing to read. Yet, most of my attention was on the fact he was still going at it. ^^
I really mean it when I say I enjoyed your not so short story immensely. I will even be brave and write I truly hope you will write something similar in the future - namely some well-written, professional story like this one now with Battousai and Kaoru-chan because there are not many fanfics that are actually really good when it comes to Kenshin losing his control like that (a hardcore fanfic reader is saying this).
I wanted to write this just to praise you and to make sure you know how amazing you are since I know people just read stories but don't bother to write a review forgetting a writer had spent long, long hours writing it for them.
Your story can be described by a universal in it's use "WOW". Really. :)There are some silly mistakes, yes. But they are so tiny and you overdid yourself to the point when little mistakes like that can be easily ignored. Besides this oneshot has 9k words of amazingly written lemon - both when it comes to details and writing style. For the love of God and all that is holy, it would be really rude to hold it against you.
But I can't stop myself and congratulate Kenshin his stamina. I mean, seriously. I was impressed you had managed to describe his personality so well and that all this urge to prove his ownership on her was an amazing thing to read. Yet, most of my attention was on the fact he was still going at it. ^^
I really mean it when I say I enjoyed your not so short story immensely. I will even be brave and write I truly hope you will write something similar in the future - namely some well-written, professional story like this one now with Battousai and Kaoru-chan because there are not many fanfics that are actually really good when it comes to Kenshin losing his control like that (a hardcore fanfic reader is saying this).
I wanted to write this just to praise you and to make sure you know how amazing you are since I know people just read stories but don't bother to write a review forgetting a writer had spent long, long hours writing it for them.
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August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So sexy!!! Kenshin and kaoru are sex goddeses!