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for Catch the Thunder

by Rhov

person Vyper
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story has even gotten hotter. I can't wait for Laxus to show Freed his power over him in the club in front of everyone. It is so sexy. Too bad Laxus isn't wearing a condom also so Freed can help him cum. That sounds too hot for words. Thanks for bringing Laxus home. I am so happy for Freed since he deserves to be truly loved by his Master.
person Brittany Hobbs
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read this last chapter, and when Laxus came back, I swuealed. My grandparents have me this look like: "what the hell?" My grandmother asked if I saw a spider. I replied: "No!! Laxus is back!!!" She looked at me like I was insane. I loved it!!! (The chapter, I mean. Not the look) Rhov, you happen to be one of my writing idols. You have this way with words that is amazing. I hope and strive to be as great an author as you!!! Thanks for the amazing stories! ☺️☺️☺️
person Vyper
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Laxus is back! Squee! That is the best news! I love this story and can't wait for more! Please more!
person Me
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
We Brits call it Christmas pudding I have never heard someone call it plum pudding :3 , just saying
person Seras
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I finally found the time to read more and catch up on my FAVORITE of all of your stories. I've always been such a fan of the idea of Freed and Laxus being together. Now I'm bawling. You're a fantastic writer and I hope you continue with this story. So many feels! My heart is breaking!
person Vyper
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please let Laxus return soon. I don't want Freed taken advantage of and I want these two happy together again. I miss Laxus loving Freed. He needs to be loved so badly. By the way great chapter.
person Yeollie
schedule March 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!!! Bloody brilliant!!!
person Vyper
schedule March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was so sad. I want Laxus to return and tell Freed he is going to marry him and stay with him forever. I want them happy. I hope Laxus doesn't get caught and that he comes home to Freed showing Freed how much he loves him. This last chapter made me cry.
person Vyper
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter. Laxus as Freed's slave was a nice touch and I liked the Christmas dinner with family. I want Laxus to ask Freed to marry him, but not too soon. I hope they do become engaged to marry though at some point. Maybe a promise ring would be nice until Laxus can afford a diamond for Freed. Then again knowing Freed a paddle would be more the idea of a romantic gesture LOL. :)
person Vyper
schedule January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about all your troubles. The chapter was perfect. I loved it and I want to thank you for the chapter. I love this story so much and I really can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it will go well. :)

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