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for Catch the Thunder

by Rhov

person Vyper
schedule December 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I want to see Laxus carry Freed everywhere. I love that. I love these two men! Thank you for the awesome chapter!
person Vyper
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Freed would make a cute little nurse for Laxus. This story gets better and better. I love it.
person Seras
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how Laxus is so protective of Freed. I'm so glad you decided to keep this going. I look forward to it every week. <3
person Vyper
schedule December 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Freed's parents freaking out is funny. I hope that they are good to Freed and Laxus since Laxus loves Freed. I want to definitely see Freed happy.
person Vyper
schedule November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Freed, Laxus is a dom for his Father and he never knew. It will be interesting to have them meet with Laxus being Freed's boyfriend. It would be a little odd if Freed and Laxus get married with Laxus still being a dom for Freed's Father. Still I want Laxus and Freed to be happy plus marry each other. Please say Laxus will be extra gentle with Freed's feelings for a while as Freed needs the nurturing especially now.
person Vyper
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! They finally did it and it was super romantic! Thank you! Plus them saying I love you meant so much! I so love this story and want them to be a full time couple getting married and everything! I love Laxus and Freed! More please! More more more!
person Vyper
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
God that last chapter was awesome. The opera house with Freed and Laxus kissing like that. Yes! It was so good and the way you described the couple was even better. Mira better keep her paws to herself as Freed and Laxus are both taken! I hope that we see more Freed getting loving from his sweet boyfriend including a nice sex scene in the future. I want to see Freed really beg.
person Vyper
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter made me so happy. I wish Laxus did not have to work in that club, but I understand why he does. He and Freed are so romantic and beautiful together. I like seeing them happy. I hope Laxus and Freed kiss much more often. I also hope they enjoy their date as the two deserve to have a good time. I am also glad Laxus is in love with Freed. I hope Freed admits his love for Laxus and vice versa. Thank you for the new chapter. It really was the best as is this story.
person Vyper
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping for a new chapter soon. I want to see Freed give Lauxus a blow job and for Lauxus to make Freed swallow all of his seed. The two are such a cute couple that I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I am working on three stories at a time, but I tend to hit a roll with one story for a while giving the other two a break. I don't know how it works with you, but inspiration seems to come in spurts for me. From another author to you I love most of your stories although I am addicted to this one.
person Vyper
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love it when Lauxus makes Freed cum. It is so hot. He and Freed are so hot! I need more please write another chapter soon!

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