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Ah Ah Ah Woooo!
I can't feel my Weiner when I'm with you,
But I love Weiner!
But I love Weiner!

Wow, the 'cast was right, it's nuts how much a gap in quality can exist between stories by the same author. The Zelda one from last week was everything good MC should be, dark, twistedly erotic, a perfect blend of hot fetishes that explore demeaning in a purely fantastical sexual way. This story, though, is everything that goes wrong with MC...where the Zelda story was erotically charged, this is just a crass, crude jumble of sloppy rutting, and where the Zelda story used the humiliation element with exactly enough subtlety to corrupt the character but keep her true and provide a darkly thrilling story, this one is just purely insulting. Alice was right, it's hard to tell whether the Zelda story was just a lucky accident by a bad writer, or if this story is just an uncharacteristic low point for an author who's actually very capable. I guess we'll find out if Imasuky writes any more MC stories!

A little on the short side, but that is easily compensated for by how good a read it was. Cynthia brainwashed into a cock-loving slut is a nice surprise and the detail throughout left very little to the imagination.
Descendant of the Shadows
-Twisteddarkness

Championing date rape? Classy. I'm sure you make your parents proud.

One of my favorite fanfic authors writing about one of my favorite themes in one of my favorite series? Is Christmas early this year?
As always, the writing is perfect, the sex is very well-written and detailed, and I especially love what you did to her personality. Definitely expect to see more of this sort of work, or maybe a continuation of this story.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Pootis, Spencer.

Shouldn't this site have a "Bimbo" tag? Most MC stories are great, but bimbo-ification is the kind of insulting misogyny that readers should be warned about.