schedule
May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I know it's been a while but I hope to see another chapter soon
schedule
May 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this story. When will you post the next chapter?
schedule
March 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see that this story seems to have stalled out here at Chapter 7. It was REALLY enjoyable so far, much more well done than many of the other "erotic alternate playthrough" sort of stories that I've read because of how you are building the relationship(s) between Merry and her Pokemon.
schedule
December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story a lot. I can't wait to see what happens next. A funny thing is that I also caught in the beginning of the game a poochyena with the move Thunder Fang. I am curious on how often that happens?
schedule
September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW ... That was an amazing story. I cannot wait for the next part
schedule
May 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally too lazyto review. And I hope auto correct is working on my side. This story is full of win, I really really like it and hope you have the time to updarw soonU
schedule
April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is coming along nicely, but it's not just females that have a submissive nature. It's something all genders have. I would correct Jinx's statement to read "[Lassie, Meredith has a submissive side like anyone else"
schedule
April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I can't wait to see where you go with this storyline!
schedule
March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I like your combo of plot and smut! About the xp share... Maybe have it work like a mechanic used by trainers; they have their pokemon out of their pokeballs to watch a team member fight an opponent and by watching they learn ( =xp)?
schedule
March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Look man. Gotta say I'm loving this story.but i have no idea on how the exp share would work. Waiting not so patiently for the next update