rate_review Reviews

One of the reasons I really like your writing is that you always surprise me.

How is it going to dig himself out of this?

If this doesn't work out in the end I'll never forgive you!

Cute chapter...too cute.

I really thought the interaction between the bus driver and Tsukune was a nice touch.

you know I was really hoping that you would write it so that inner mocha did like girls "in that way" and she really does seem the type that would. I really don't see how you're going to bring them together as a group if they don't have something like that to tie them together.

once again you wrote a great chapter with incredible emotional depth, that was truly enjoyable. as always looking forward to the next chapter.

PS. I hope you haven't forgotten about bringing Ruby, and Kokoa into the group. haven't heard from Kokoa in a while, but she's usually somewhere in the periphery. :)

The end of chapter 2 reminded me of "Died in Your Arms Tonight." I really hope that Tsukune can give Kurumu love and keep you from having to write her dying again. I really don't want any of the girls to suffer. This is probably the best of the series in terms of building drama and making the reader root for a happy ending. Please keep up the good work!

Great to see the next chapter in your Rosario Vampire series! Off to a good start with these first two chapters, I really like the conversation between Mizore and Kurumu. Show's their friendship and more of their character.

I agree, Mizore and Kurumu are the most popular girls in the series. I personally think it's cause their more interesting characters. I think I'd be a bigger fan of Moka if she was her Inner personalty all the time.

Keep up the good work! Looking forward to more!

Nice conversation between Mizore and Kurumu.

I'm really hoping you don't kill her off like in your 'other' story.

All in all I'd say that that was a good transition from the first chapter, and I've always appreciated I'm also who takes the time to explore the emotions of the characters they write about.

The chapter was a bit shorter than I would have liked but sometimes you just can't get everything at once.

One thing that kind of confused me was this part here ("That explains your terrible grades,” Mizore couldn’t resist teasing.

 

“Shut up, Yukari,” Kurumu fired back.  They both laughed.

 

“I can understand how you feel, a bit,” the snow-woman offered.  “It’s tough feeling so strongly for someone when you don’t think he feels the same way.  I’m just glad…”  Mizore stopped herself short, on the verge of divulging just how well things had turned out for her.")

Why is Kurumu telling Yukari to shut up?

Maybe let me know in a PM?

that was 100% grade A awesome! Your creativity continues to amaze me! Can't wait for the next update.

I have to admit, this installment gave me a chuckle. Good work. Hopefully the pace won't be as slow as the previous ones.