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October 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Vary dark, but sexy. Would like to read more, especially with breeding
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October 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I know this review is 2 years late but I hope you still read it, because I really enjoyed your story. You have an excellent way with words, and the scenes were described in amazing detail. Carl and the fat bastard were very interesting opposing characters, also.
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May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
You have a good book and concept overall. But what is the biggest letdown is how disjointed the story is.
There is very little backstory and the actual storytelling is done in such a way where it doesn't flow and is extremely confusing.
Like I have said, it's a good idea and concept, but the way the story is disjointed and confusion, is its biggest letdown.
I hope this review can help you be a better writer.
You have a good book and concept overall. But what is the biggest letdown is how disjointed the story is.
There is very little backstory and the actual storytelling is done in such a way where it doesn't flow and is extremely confusing.
Like I have said, it's a good idea and concept, but the way the story is disjointed and confusion, is its biggest letdown.
I hope this review can help you be a better writer.