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Hey there just to give you a bit of encouragement your story is amazing in fact the whole chain is. The only thing is that I hope you give ruby some time since she was my fav from the series

It's a real nice story with some romance. I guess Moka will have some chock as it seems she thinks to be above the others in Tsukune 's heart. Though I feel you could develop a little more (llike telling more days instead of one for each week a girl have with Tsukune. Continue! It's good to read!

Thanks for the update. I have always thought that Mizore was the forgotten member of the harem, so this chapter was really nice. I am one of those perverts hoping for the harem ending, but we will see where you go with this. Please keep up the good work. Peace!

A nice chapter. I almost thought Mizore would invite mom to have a threesome just to get rid of her. And poor Ruby, she's going to have to tie up Tsukune and screw him senseless to solve her own (ahem) blue balls.

I think that this story is coming along great. The depth of the interaction between the characters has been refreshing too. I like how you have been showing how much each of the characters show concern for the others and even giving each other respect while each is dating him. I also love watching how inner Moka's she'll is starting to crack with each interaction tion with Tsukune. Watching her inner struggles and her outward appearance has been very refreshing. I think it would be interesting to see them do another shopping trip. Are the Mokas going to argue among themselves? I actually think that his harem situation could actually work, but moka is being difficult to convince. Can't wait to see how that and this plays out.

You are getting a whole lot better at this with each chapter.

This tops the last. And thanks for adding Tsurara in there too.

Kudos!

HOLY SHIT! I was not expecting THAT but Hot Damn! Excellent writing!
Tsukune you lucky son of a bitch!

Another great chapter. Especially with how you wrote Kurumu.

Another Impressive Chapter as always.

Good, very good, thank you. *sigh* Still would like to see some action with Ruby. A pity she isn't one of the girlfriends.