im hooked. please write more!!
I hope things take a little more of a...positive turn soon for the MC's relationship with the pokemon. :(
I rarely visit this site and I never planned on making an account until I found this jewel. I just love it to pieces! Everything flows so smoothly and there's a sort of realism to it that most Pokemon/Human stories (or at least the ones that I've read) lack. I've never been into Pokemon fanfiction unless it's a M!Pokemon/F!Human (OC or Reader) love/sex story because it's such a fascinating concept to explore if it's done right, but unfortunately the majority of the ones that I've found are F!Pokemon/M!Human or just too poorly written. So I'm excited that I stumbled upon this amazing, beautiful, and addicting story. I'm actually double excited because the pairing(s) with my favorite Pokemon: the Eeveelution. I can't wait to read the future chapters and have more Eeveelutions (especially your new ones) introduced to the story. I'm also curious to know if any more Eveelutions will be paired with the main character, or if it'll just remain Espeon, Umbreon, and Flareon; they've always been my top 3 favorite, followed by Leafeon and then either Vaporeon or Jolteon.
Anyways, moving on from my gushing/fangirling... again, I love your fic (which deserves a whole lot more reviews) to death and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter and the profile for the new Eeveelution.
I feel sorry for the Main Character/Reader, but I really hope that she doesn't lash out at or push away Nox, Ember, and Rorsh. And yay for Jolteon officially being introduced! I'm interested in seeing what his personality will be like compared to the other/older Eeveelution.
I know that I've already said this before, but I really love this story. It's definitely become my favorite fanfic. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Oh gosh, I was thinking about this fic & a random thought came to me:
Plot twist, the egg has a shiny riolu that manifested from her aura powers. Horrible wishy thought, but it's amusing to me haha.
Also, I love the beginning chapters well before anything sexual came up! It wasn't slow to me. Rather, it was really great to see the progression of MC's bond with her Pokémon. I also really love the sortof domestic aspect of it, like having your pokémon companions around while living your life regularly.
I've said this before, but I feel like saying it again: I love your fic! And your writing!! Theres a sort of realism to it? Like, you write everything so fluidly that evey scene plays out in my head really well. Thanks for sharing & writing it. I enjoy this fic very much. <3
I HAD to get an account after finishing this!! I can't believe I stumbled onto this fic, it's such a gem! Thank you so much for sharing && writing it. I love it very much <3<3
I'm so excited about this new element in the story! Aura powers are crazy cool, I can't believe you're incorporating it! *o* I hope you'll delve into it some more.
(I'm also excited about these new eeveelutions!! Do you draw? Have a blog/dA?? Hhh you're getting me so hyped haha. I love seeing new pokémons **v**)
As Always thank you for the wonderful read. I love how you're handling the story along with the detail you put into everyone's thoughts, emotions, and action. Can't wait to see the next chapter or the future eeveelutions.
Great job with thisbstory and chapter! I just finished reading the whole thing and I must sayvyou have a way of drawing in the audience! I wasn't even that big into Pokemon but this story has definitely changed my mind! Now that our main character has had a taste of the forbidden I wonder how everything else will play out. Anyway Superb job and I look forward for more!
I loved Chapter 20. I'm a big fan of Pokemon x Human love/sex stories and content (well, 'male' pokemon x 'female' human, to be more specific), and I'm glad to see this story seemingly moving a little more down that line. I thought you handled the conversation between Rorsh and the MC very well, and I love the relationship you've built up between them over the course of the story, so I hope to see it continue to blossom. :)
Glad you're alive and thanks for the update. How goes the job hunting?