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February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Sorry no horror here. If you wanted horror then ditch the dialog between Kurumu and her mother have she killed Tsukune. So perhaps it goes straight to waking up screaming once she realized that she killed him. That dialog has the effect of removing any aspect of horror, to me anyways.
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February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was dark.
Good Work.
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February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kurumu talk about your worst nightmare!
As far as it being horror, not so much. More like a tragedy. Definitely the most horrific thing that could happen to Kurumu, but it reads more like a tragedy than a horror.
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February 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well that was very good, both thrilling and very creepy! I thought that nurse chick creeped me out before I read this, now I just might have a nightmare! (shivers from head to toe)
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February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well chapter 2 certainly was on the dark side of things. I do think you wrote a convincing story there. It would've been nice to see mocha put him in his place in the show so I'm glad to see you go after him here!
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February 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I didn't think Kokoa would ever actually admit that to herself
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February 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am liking how you are taking this into a darker direction.
As much as I love Mizore and Kurumu, I really hope that at the end of the entire series, there is a satisfying conclusion that hopefully goes well for the two.
Kudos!
As much as I love Mizore and Kurumu, I really hope that at the end of the entire series, there is a satisfying conclusion that hopefully goes well for the two.
Kudos!
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February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but I dislike this. It lacks the bright, cheery tone of your stories that I enjoyed. It's written well, and would probably appeal to an audience that enjoys this sort of thing, but I doubt the audience that has read the previous chapgers of this story would enjoy rape/ darker topics. Just my opinion though.
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February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am torn on the rape scene is it too dark for Rosario + Vampire or not? I would say if you went off the anime its too dark but if you go off the scenes for Mizore especially with Miyabi Fujisaki in the Manga then its in keeping with the tone even if the assault was implied rather than out right shown. Over all I suspect that the different tone will generate comments and debate.
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January 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Now this is interesting.
I wonder how this will unravel.
I wonder how this will unravel.