rate_review Reviews

@Luke

Maybe, maybe not. Others are free to continue the story if they wish.

Since it doesn't say the story is complete are you going to continue it and introduce more characters. And possibly make it so kaa wants to use them as slaves instead of eating them cause that would be cool.

Mixed bag. The hypnotism, oral sex and intercourse were good. The mind erasure unpleasant in and of itself but also because she has no personality to be dominated anymore. The whole body penetration was just silly. The vore not good, though it was a small part at the end so no biggie. Would like to see more or more like it but without the bad parts, intercourse and pregnancy and egg laying would be nice.