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for Inner Dragon, Inner Demon

by Lovlynlethal

person Fairylove
schedule August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is a wonderful story. You managed to both keep true to the original characters as well as make your characters believable and engaging. Really liked your imagination in how these two characters would please each other and themselves. The tail!?! So good. 

 

Only notes I have are one to go through it spelling wise as some words are incorrect (i.e. "we're" vs "were", etc) and please write the next chapter :)

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