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I loved your story!!!! Update please!!!!
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEASE!!!!
I am so happy that you updated. This is a great story! I love how Iason is trying to figure it all out and poor Riki...
And so it begins. Iason has discovered an appetite for both the physical sensations Riki can provide, but the potential for many new sensations. I do not think this bodes well at all for Riki, and Iason has only scratched the very surface of what he is capable of becoming.
Riki would do better to beg for mercy from a kitchen appliance, I fear.And how he could believe, even for a moment, that Iason would keep his word to a mongrel from Midas is an exercise in self-deception which will result in additional pain for Riki. His training will be nothing to envy, although Iason will enjoy it a great deal, I think.
As ever, it is always worth the wait for an update, when you offer us such perfect glimpses into darkness. A very merry Christmas, and the blessings of the Solstice, my dear Pip!
When - are - you - going - to - update! I'm dying here!
You know, I have always wondered what it would be like for a cyborg to experience human sensations, human drives so deeply ingrained in the psyche they cannot be programmed away. You have shown me with astonishing clarity how it would feel, and I'm absolutely breathless with awe.
Iason's cruelty is simply what he is, who he is, as impersonal as the rain. Riki is indeed the polar opposite, his anger and sarcasm the byproduct of his loneliness and desire to be loved. But in this moment, Riki has indeed changed Iason. Whether or not it's for the better will remain to be seen. I have no illusions Iason will stop being cruel. He might learn to mean it, though.
Love it! Love it! Love it! I can hardly wait for more. Please update soon!
L-O-V-E IT! Please write more and update quicker. :)
Ah, poor Riki. He is simply over his head right now, isn't he? Iason has all the cards, and isn't afraid to use them, and Riki is far too interesting, and stimulating.
I did feel for Daryl in this chapter, torn between needing to obey Iason, and his sympathetic handling of Riki. I was quite ready to believe Daryl did have Riki's interests at heart when he soothed him afterward. But, you know, that could just be my desperate bid to put a kinder face on it all.
And of course, this is only the beginning, so Riki has far to go.
Just superb, as always! :D