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September 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This has been a fantastic story with a terrific ending. I'm glad that the outer Moka is alive and watching like a guardian angel. I know that you already have an epilogue, but if I could make a suggestion, it would be fun to see their lives after the academy. Eventually, they return, maybe with kids and the kids get to meet Outer Moka for a day. Whatever you decide on, I'm glad I found your story and I hope you make another.