The ending was just perfect! This has to be in the top 10 of the most romantic stories that I've read on any platform, and I read a TON of romantic stories. Great narrative, well-paced, and it had a highly satisfying conclusion. Nice work!
Ughhh, at first I thought you were just teasing, but now I know you're blatantly leaving out the good parts. Dude this suppose to be an ADULT story! It's suppose to have sex scenes in it! This story is so drab and boring it needs something to spice it up!! Solo time isn't going to cut it! Cut loose, have a little fun and show us something hot and heavy already!
I made an account just to review this story.
Thank you for your excellent writing, your slow build up to kinky-goodness, and your dedication to keeping the FT crew in character. The bittersweet romantic wishful thinking always gets me, I'm a sap for it.
And I don't normally enjoy AU fanfics, I always thought the characters stayed truest to themselves in their own world, but you have opened my eyes, thank you, thank you thank you!
All of my encouragement to you and your future chapters and stories!
-_- You are fucking tease, seriously if you're going to hint at a lemon scene at least have the guts to actually write it, not cop-out with some off scene transition bullshit! That shit pisses people off, I get that you're trying to go for romance and such but that doesn't mean you can't show the spicey stuff once in a while.
I really like how you are setting this up and how you are taking your time building the tension. I think that as romantic story, it works on levels that one does not often see on this site. This is terrifc work!
Oh my goodness this is amazing!!! You have me hanging off the edge of a couch reading this. Do you know when you might update again or how long this fic will be, or are you playing it by ear at this point? Part of me need to know who it was asap, part of me wants this to drag out as long as possible, and another part of me want to know asap so another part of the storyline can come into play so I get the best of both worlds.
Lastly, you're an awesome writer. Even though I don't comment on every fic, you're writing is excellent, both in execution of ideas and in organization. It's also a relief to read good fanfic that isn't written with terrible grammar. Keep up the amazing work!