Fantastic end to the 'Gremory' Arc, good job, looking forward to Dust taking all the Phenex girls on their hot springs repeatedly. After that, he can got to Kyoto and take that lovely mother-daughter fox pair, and maybe even Jeanne of the Hero Faction depending on the timeline.
Hey love the story and I've always enjoyed reading it.
I figured I'd let you know that the formatting or something for chapter's 18 and 19 are a bit weird and seems to stretch the sentences all the way to the side, so much so that I need to move the screen, wasn't sure if you were aware or not but it's made it incredibly difficult to read the story.
This is for the IPad by the way, I'm not sure if it persists to the computer or anything but I figured I'd let you know, all of the other chapters before 18 are good.
Amazingly done for Grayfia, looking forward to the next one! After this, while still in the Underworld, you totally should have Dusk use Ravel to go to the Phenex house and take her mother and the rest of Raiser's peerage for himself too, though.
As for Venelana, how about a threesome with Rias? Mother-daughter bonding is the way to go for full domination of a sexy MILF!
hello friend hears a question if it is not much trouble hehehe wanted to know if you have not thought about making another story more or less like this but with the series of either naruto, fairy tail or one piece why would be cool do not you think ???
ps: in terms of the ideas for the chapters of grayfia and venelana you could use the hentais of Yareruko Densha Ecchi, Katainaka Ni Totsui of Kita Russia Musume To H Shimakuru Ohanashi, Jitaku Keibiin, Rinkan Club and Tsuma Netori: Ryoujoku Rinne I hope and serve you to give you ideas for the next chapter luck
Hello friend, how I hope you are good, I just read the chapter you went up and it's very good, no doubt really great sensational, I really like it, I end up surrendering to dusk hehehe I hope you can soon upload the next chapter at the time you plan to put on grayfia and venelana because I'm dying to read the continuation luck friend
You forget about Ophis , Dusk should fuck her too.
hello friend I hope you are well hey sorry to bother you but I wanted to know when you can update the next chapter since I'm dying to read the continuation please update soon luck
Love this story. If you want ideas you could try common sense alteration. Meaning like hypnotize the school to think it's completely normal for dusk to bang girls in class or girls to wear slutty uniforms haha. Im happy what ever you choose to do :) cheers
Another thing you could also use is Ravel to bring her mother, lady Phenex, into Dusk's Harem. The latest anime season showed she's quite sexy:
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/highschooldxd/images/3/33/Lady_Phenex_in_HERO.png/revision/latest?cb=20180605161958
Also all of Riser's peerage/Harem too. All it would take is for Ravel to arrange a 'visit home' with Dusk accompanying her.
hello jejeje sorry to upload another comment but you know law the comments that put kingcham and sewer and in fact are very good ideas friend maybe you can add them to your story for new chapters