rate_review Reviews

Great story and puts an interesting side play to what might happen if something like this were ever to come up. 

As someone who has long loved both reading and writing, I have to admit that I found your writing style to be superior to many of the other Fanfictions I've read.  The characters do not act far enough out of character for the story to be unbelievable in the least.  Grammar and punctuation were also well done.  In whole, a nearly profesional work that I greatly enjoyed.

Hey great story also you could post this story on the regular fan fiction site and it would be all good. I my sled would like to see a sequel because I really enjoyed it.