I like stories where the characters do good for each other, respect each other, and just have a good time. Sure, this story is not a masterpiece. The dialogue could be crisper, the chapters could be embellished a lot more, and an exciting backstory wouldn't be bad either. But it's a good framework. You have beautiful fantasies and the will to put them on paper. So I would like to encourage you to write more. I think I will have some fun with your stories in the future.
ruined it with male pokemon getting it on with the girls....bye
Quite good. I'm glad at the Ash/Harem setting. I also liked the way the Alolan girls were brought in, as well as the ending.
Very direct, but at the same time it doesn't wast anyone's time.
The Pokephillia came out of nowhere but it didn't really detract from anything.
All together I liked it.