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for Past is Passed

by ReddAlice

person C.X.Z
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TBC?
person C.X.Z
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm part of my coment didnt show up so im trying again *frowns*


whats with the question mark? Although theres not much to go by, it looks like its leading to a good place. Even if you don’t really like it now, make it so you do like it, its your story your creation make it so you love it. =) but what ever you do continue it, i was kinda annoyed after reading that and seeing the question mark after the TBC. There aren’t enough stories out there with an actual plot, definitely not enough from talented writers such as yourself. plus it looks to me like a Tatsumi/Tsuzuki ^_^ *fan girl squeel*
person Sc00byD00315
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. It was very interesting. Are you going to write more?
person Sarah
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story line!!! Please continue it!! But if you do, you\'ll probably have to be careful about keeping them In Character.
person Meiouh
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Why didn\'t you continue it? It\'s great!
person zatken
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good ;-D
person tyai
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...other than a tiny bit of confusion, (not that that\'s unusal for me...) I really would like you to continue this. I love your GW fics (even if they DO make me sad on occasion) (not that that\'s bad...) and I would love to read this fic. ...>.< I REALLY am BAD at reviewing...gomen... in short, I liked what I read and will happily read more iu wau wanna write it.

ZYa!
Tyai

ps...when will you be posting serated edges???...WILL you be posting serated edges??? If you already have posted it, where is it?


ZYA!!!!! see ya in a few days...by the way, I fully intend on kiddnapping you and holding you hostage for AT LEAST a night or two ..... or three when I get back...as long as you don\'t object of course...ZYA!! >^.^<
person Amanda
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter!!! =D
person Kay
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far, this seems to be interesting. It\'s very in-character for a fanfic, and there\'s intriguing hints at what\'s going to happen. I, for one, would definitely be interested in reading more.
person Gelasia Castle
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wharghable! I loved this fic so much! It was wonderful. A little vague on the kinky details...but, oh well. Please write more?

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