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Are you actually going to finish this, or have you dropped it? I really love what you've written so far! I think you kept everyone very IC, and I'm interested to see where this is going. Please continue if you can.

MORE!

I\'m guessing the author isn\'t around any more, since this is such an old story, but just in case: Ignore the moron who said you were going OOC. I\'ve seen incredibly OOC stories, and this is not one of them. In fact, my first thought on finishing it was how in-character and \'realistically\' you had maintained the characters in an unusual situation. This is one of the best fics on AFF, in those terms at least, and certainly the best S/An one. I don\'t know why people would so randomly and stupidly flame decent fics when there\'s so much real crap about! You should write more...

Unlike that one whiner I think you kep the Paladin in character. He is awsome but some people can only take so much - even a regenerator. (And Mr. Anderson is my favorite so it\'s not a casual comment here. ) Anyway, I absolutely loved it though the second chapter left me in a bit of confusion and shock.

So, how about a new chapter?

New chapter coming soon.
*waves at her troll*

Not bad at all. A couple of easily made typos here and there, but nothing horrible. Very nice.

I wouldn't pay attention to the raving child. Apparently it's that time of the month again. Amazing how fan-girls will scream and cry if a character isn't kept the two dimensional 'hottie' that they love to think is real. Character assassination isn't found here. This is a plausible situation and Alucard is just enough of a bastard to force Seras' hand in it.

Normally I'm not this harsh, and I don't know if you consider this constructive criticism but I REALLY need to tell you your fic made me very angry. It was a disgrace to Anderson. He would not submit to that kind of treatment. Paladin Alexander Anderson ..... PALADIN... it was a disgrace to his name. Normally I don't mind OOC fics but this was so much out of character it made me sick with rage.

That's disgusting!

If you want Anderson to be Seras's little bitch, I sugest you keep those fantasies in your head.

Wow! Reaaly good so far. I\'m not one for Hellsing fanfics, but this is really good. Keep up the good work.

must..have..more!!!!!..that was damn good!!!!