rate_review Reviews

Pretty good for your first NC-17 fic here. I liked the detail to the emotions being felt by Rei and Shinji, they felt real. Your descriptions were top notch, so was your dialogue. I kinda squirmed at the use of the word \"cunt\" but it\'s just me. I use that word only when I\'m cursing out someone I really hate, not when I\'m writing lemons (and I have 7 published on this site). And thanks for the apology on grammer and spelling, it\'s kind of distracting in such a good lemon. Keep up the good work, I will continue to read anything you write - I really enjoy it.

Thanks both.. ^^;;

Well, Locust.... I\'m a big ShinjixRei fan, and well, I just don\'t like the idea of Gendo screwing Rei...<<; And I wrote this one on the spurr of the moment, really, without any truly prior planning, just to see how well I could. Thanks for the idea though... I may write one like that in the future..

.... Stupid thing cut off my message... -_-;

Thanks for the idea, though Locust... I might do a fic like that in the future, but I mostly did this one on the spurr of the moment without any prior planning to test myself.

You already know what I think. I could never write something like that.. I don\'t do lemons.. I just don\'t know how. This is really good. And I\'m still up for hunting down anyone that gives you a bad review. ^.~

It would have been better if u had written this as a Rei/Gendo fic, like \'Fallen Angel\' - also on this site.

Cooory ory though. You should write another chapter where she has sex with Gendo. Rei should get pregnant too.