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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww plaese updatee soon
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I absolutely love your descriptive passages, you have a great feel for the characters and I like the way you\'ve built up a foundation for the story. Great work. You are a talented writer. Keep it up.
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, hope to see more of it soon.
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like Under the Glass Moon and this story is very interesting. I hope to read more chapters of this story. Keep up the good work!
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update as soon as possible,can\'t wait to read more
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i have read Under the glass moon i love it...its a very well written and luel is so hot <<>>\'\'\' ~drools~ but anyway ...I enjyoed writing this i just hope The neice doesnt steal Luel from Nell i always wanted them to be together they make the perfect couple i will countine to read along so write some more ! please i really enjoy this manga alot and i hope to write something her soon about them so see you soon hoping to read more ^^
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July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really good so far!! The only thing i\'d do is to go back and make it a little easier to read (i.e. Make new paragraphs and dialoge easier to read) and grammer check. (You need commas). MWAH! Write more!