rate_review Reviews

Wow that was so cute! and steamy at the end! I like momiji and Tohru...he\'s so adorable and such a gentlemen...I really liked this story and it seemed really believable to me...the characters (despite certain actions/words in the mist of lust) were very in character...you did a great job!

One could have never guessed this. This was wonderfully written and Momiji wasn\'t even OOC. Neither was Tohru. Good job and hope you write more alternative pairings. :) Thats all I have to say. Until then.

Kasiree

I\'ll be honest. At first I thought, yewwk, little Momiji and Tohru? Then I will admit to a morbid curiosity that drove me to read the rest of the story. But really, it was very touching. The best parts were the shared moments of embarassment. I like that you still remembered who they were. It made the story all the better. Really, I\'m not sure if the ending was the ending due to what appears to be a post limit here, but it was a nice ending, the moment of quiet realization. It can be taken in so many ways. I kept hissing at them though, going, \"Shh! There are people sleeping!\" -_^ Very nice. I\'ll have to look for more of your stories now.

AWESOME! Hot, sexy, and sweet, I thought it was a great job showing how two teen innocents face the uncertainties of whether or whether not to do it. And Momiji was so sweet to be willing to hold himself off from Tohru, it shows how much he cares about her. Very true to his self-sacrificing personality that cares more someone else over his own wants. Pat yourself on the back for an excellent job!