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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh...you\'re a perve!! ^_^ And a talented one at that!! Bravo!! I knew that Melfina was a harlot! But in a sweet caring way!! ^_^;;; Really... Aww hell. she\'s just a bad girl acting sweet to get attention and we all know it!! I mean, she cuddled with Jim because she wanted Gene to want HER more! Not only is it a genius tactic, but it\'s practical! Act innocent, no one will want to kill you! See what your pervy fanfic has done to my mind!! <----But it\'s a good thing! ^_^ I\'m just trying to say Fab-o job!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS STORY AND YOU SHOULD KEEP IT UP. AND PLUS I AM VERY PROUD OF YOU FOR WRITTING THIS FANFICTION
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. That could be a very good explaination as to why he was so full of energy when Melfina got done healing him. :-D
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really beautiful. It\'s always nice to see a sweet, romantic lemon. This section needs more Gene/Melfina fics, too.
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That\'s all I can say. Wow. *gets ready to walk out, but runs back* Support the Eisha/Jim romance! *laughs madly and dashes away*