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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really admire your creativity and style with how you added such a twist to your story, it\'s simply great!! I\'m just dying to read more, please write more I am practically dying with the suspense!!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, your story has meaning and it is something a lilttle bit different than others. Like the whole way that Serena looses her memory. ALthough your writing is great you still need to work on it like explaining yourself more, be more detailed, and watch out for spelling errors! >.< Either than that. keep up the good work and update soon.. cuz I want to know what happens next!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good story. Very erotic. Your grammer and spelling could use some improvment though. Something to work on next time. Update soon!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come on! You stoped at a crucial point of the story! Please continue to write more and please inform me when you do. I really think this story is great and I can\'t wait to read what happens next! I hope you will get Serena to remember Darien and get rid of Jake because he is sooo sick!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it ya must update it
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story post more soon please I know it been a while but this is a good story please finish it
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story plez write more soon and e-mail when you do
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i never can remember to review here but i remembered this time. i really like how this story is going! can say much moe. bye!
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September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOOoooooooooooooooooo... I wanna know what happens..... Tell me.. Tell me
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*Sammy*~
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*Sammy*~
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe I like the story Melly ur doing a good job wit it. Update soon(Even though I already read it^_^)