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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all. My only real complaint is you suffer from the same problem I used to have... You end the chapter too soon. You sould draw things out more, add on more, etc. The writing is good, but it's overly short when, if you had more in each chapter, it would be really good.
Plus, come on, Minako/Kunzite. Much love.
Plus, come on, Minako/Kunzite. Much love.
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey look i really iked the story and all but ive been waiting 4 a long time 4 u 2 finish with your chapter issue or whatever and its really getting on my nerves i want to read it but u havent put anything up yet and im getting really PISSED!
Thanx 4 your time
LUV,
Sarah
Thanx 4 your time
LUV,
Sarah
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was attracted by the summary, since your fic seems to be the *only* senshi/shitennou fic around here. I hope you will put the rest up soon. Judging from the reviews, this is a nice story. I am looking forward to the coming chapters and be the judge myself.
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really liked the first chapter of your story and hope that you continue writting on it. One thing on the disclaimer that you have is Sera Munn, its Sailor Moon.
LOOOVVVEE your story, please continue
QueenofMercury
www.fanfiction.net
LOOOVVVEE your story, please continue
QueenofMercury
www.fanfiction.net
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t mean to flame too much, but that was quite possibly one of the worst fics I\'ve ever read. Grammar, punctuation, the whole like was pretty much horrible. Not to mention some anatomically incorrect aspects as well. >_>;; Kid, take it slow and check everything over. Don\'t write everything as practically one long paragraph.
Ja ne.
Ja ne.
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue please
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July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! a gen/senshi fic u can\'t find that around here alot welp great fic continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dang that was harsh. i hope u have someone kill thuckiucking brd!!rd!! it\'ll be cool when she gets to run away with pirates.