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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! If I didn\'t know who wrote this, I would have thought it was Sinnamonkat writing this! Can you write about more \'lessons\' between Haru and Tohru? ^_~ I\'d love that! Hehe..
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was... hot. Great job on it. :)
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-Oh my gosh..that was great! *fans self* Whoooo. :D
-I loved the part where they were still having secks and Yuki comes by and doesn\'t have a clue...public secks...hm kinky ^_~
-And the part about syrup? hahaha.... nobody can be that naive but that part was just hilarious....XD
-I loved the part where they were still having secks and Yuki comes by and doesn\'t have a clue...public secks...hm kinky ^_~
-And the part about syrup? hahaha.... nobody can be that naive but that part was just hilarious....XD
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, to the point, and very nice!!! ;) Good-sho-shot, also possible Sequal material. ^^ very very nice!
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July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg tat is so good
I hope u update sooon
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I hope u update sooon
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really good story. good thing no one else noticed them. hope you make a second chapter
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July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is good! First of all, Tohru\'s utter cluelessness just keeps cracking me up, and then there\'s Haru, taking shameless advantage. It\'s just a really good blend of sex and comedy, and it\'s set up in a way that doesn\'t seem unnatural. I particularly like how you begin in medias res.
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July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! this was hilarious! tohru\'s comments were great and haru is just so BAD! i hope there will be more...
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July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! this was great - sexy and funny lov loved it! i usually don\'t comment but this was a real gem and i just had to say something. AWESOME job! Haru did mention \'lessons\' as in plural so i hope there\'ll be more...