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First chapter is still incomplete!!! X< Fix it!!!! *Glare*

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Anyway love plo plot and I want to see more, please update soon and fix the first chapter. Grrr...

I just love it. I bought the manga and I\'m with wit with this story. Please write more!!!
Have a nice travel. *-*

Hey guyz! I just wanted to say thanks for all the reviews. I\'m working on trying to get my story uploaded correctly, in its entirety here, but I\'m having some trouble. Hopefully it will all be fixed soon. Just wanted to answer some stuff I\'ve been hearing a lot. Yeah, I know it sucks that Raenef was raped...but it\'s al kind of vital to the plot. I felt awful after writing that scene, but this story wouldn\'t leave me alone until I put it in... *sniffs* I love Raenef sooo much and then I did that to him... As to his hair color. I started writing this fic when I\'d only read the first manga. About a week into it, I picked up the second, and low and behold...he was blonmnitmnit. So then I had to go back and try and figure out where I\'d put his hair color in as blue, and change it. I thought I\'d gotten them all, but I guess not, so I\'ll have to go back and fix that. *sigh* It\'s probably gonna be awhile, however, cuz I\'m leaving for vacation and whatnot. Oh well, at least the second chapters up. Enjoy!

Just so you know, part of Chapter one is missing and I find that a real turn-off, I love the story so far but I want to know what happens. Please continue as soon as possible

Squall Morpheus Leonhart

Gah, I hate talking in review spaces, but I wanted to comment on Amazon\'s review.

Raenef\'s hair color, like many manga characters, changes. On the cover of the first tankubon his hair was blue, as was his eyes. On the cover of the second tankubon it was blond, and his eyes were green. There is no offical hair color for our favorite baka-demon lord, all though Eclipse does say in the second tankubon \"I am looking for a young, bright-eyed boy with flaxen hair.\" to the king when he entered that one kingdom. Flaxen meaning blond.

Even if no hair color is offical, I do agree that an author should stick to one hair color (be it blond or blue) and not keep switching.

I hope no one was offended by this! I\'m not trying to pick one anyone, because I love this story and I love other Demon Diary fans! *glompsyouall* I just wanted to add my 2 cents. ^_^

*cheers you for doing fanfics on Demon Diary* Now. I hate to critigue, but thats what reveiwing is for.
1. Go through the story CAREFULLY. You keep changing Rafe\'s hair color. Its blue. You call it blonde alot. Lipse\'s hair is black. For more pics of them go to http://www.tokyopop.com/ and get through to manga then Demon Diary.
2. The story got cut off. Check it over? *eyes water* want more.
3.... theres a three? Ah yes! WRITE MORE! By the order of Amazon(Queen of things in the night that go Squish! when you step on them) I command you to write more.

continue please i like it!

Wai~! Poor Raenef! ^_^ Very interesting story, although I think the file might have been a little bit too long, since it seemed to cut off some of the end. You are going to continue, right? *whine* I _need_ lemony eclipsexraenef goodness!! Well, hope ta see you later! ^_~

Wow! Demon Diary manga! I love Demon Diary, I juts got the 2nd volume a few days ago. I love it so much!

Anywthisthis was sad, I feel so bad for Raenef! But I do think he and Eclipse look cute together ^_^

MORE!!!!!! FInaly someone wrote something about Demon Diarys!!!! WAI WAI WAI!!!! I\'m soooooo happy!