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by girlygurrl

person LunaHope
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a masterfully told, humorous and erotic story about human nature! Who among us could have resisted that temptation despite the risk? ^_^

What I thought was interesting and *very* funny was the untold/implied story. As pointed out, that had been Kenshin\'s \"Spoiler Blank\". One can\'t help but note that he knew *exactly* where \"SB\" was. Is it possible Kenshin had forgotten about \"SB\" and not remembered until too late? If so, then is it also possible our sweet little Rurouni had not only given into that same temptation in the past, but also hadn\'t *fixed* it on purpose?! One can\'t help but wonder if maybe he had something to do with its existence in the first place! Hee-hee!! ^o^ If we take this conjecture one step further, then to Sano\'s dyiay, ay, he probably wondered why he had been allowed to survived that particular incident. ^_^

Thank you for such a *fun* story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! ^_^
(I sincerely did try to avoid any major spoilers. If I didn’t succeed then I apologize. ^_^;; )
person Aden
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez. Didn\'t know Sano would be that kind of man, to peek in on them like that. Whatta perv. Well, he is a guy, guess we can forgive him, ne? I liked the way you took this fic- -it almost made me laugh. In fact, yeah, it did make me laugh. You should write another one.
person REI
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*smacks Sano upside the head* BAKA! What are you waiting for?! Go find Megumi! ;P LOL! Awesome lemon!
person KoChanneo
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Is sad you\'re not going to write more*
Good fic though. I don\'t really see how you could write more... ^_^
person SanosLilRebelGurl
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, are you ever gonna update on this story?! i would LOVE to see how it ends, like the day after on the story line. later
person Arysta
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry guys -- I\'m really glad you liked the fic, but I have absolutely NO intention of continuing it. It was a one-shot that\'s-it now-it\'s-done fic. Again, I\'m glad ynjoynjoyed!!
person Yawn
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Can\'t say much more than I loved this. Very nicely done sex scene and the part about the whole in the wall was a cool angle.
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more details please
person Al33y
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just loved this fic. Oh that naughty, naughty Sano. Tisk Tisk (Wiggles Finger) Tee-Hee really loved your story is it a one-shot I should hope not but if it is oh well, though I would like there to be a sequel... heh heh *Thinks Dirty* This was really good keep writing...Al33y~
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was good, would it be too much to ask for more? ^_~ Any way, keep up the great work.

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