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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There are only a few spelling errors that take away from this overall, very impressive writing. Well done!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There are a few mistakes that I honestly don't give a rats rear end about in the spelling department. Dear God, please continue, it's so nice to see well writting Shitennou/Senshi.
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. You should continue writing about the other couples.
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG ur gonna update right?! this story is Awsome! PLEEEEZ UPDATE SOON!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job on the story. i hope that wasnt all! i wanna noe what happend to sere + endy. i hope u continue and update soon.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Jadeite/Raye, Lita/Nephlite, Amy/Zoisite, Mina/Malachite, and Serenity/Endymion were great and cute couples in the story. I want to read more chapters soon.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi!
just wanna say that i\'m glad finally someone shares my passion for Rei-Jedite romance! I loove your fanfic and the lovemaking was beautiful and perfect, like what i\'ve always imagined. I hope you\'ll continue with the other seishis.
best wishez ;p
just wanna say that i\'m glad finally someone shares my passion for Rei-Jedite romance! I loove your fanfic and the lovemaking was beautiful and perfect, like what i\'ve always imagined. I hope you\'ll continue with the other seishis.
best wishez ;p
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, but what happens to Serenity???
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wholly support your noble cause of getting Rei and Jadeite in bed together! Because, um, yes.
Anyways. Good job! The writing is clean and easy to read; there are some minor technical errors and a few strange word choices, but maybe that\'s just me. I think there is a real strength in the way you portray the maturity (and not sexually, but that also) of the characters instead of them being stupidly innocent. Rei is going after what she wants instead of waffling and, hey, I can appreciate that. Yes, and on the subject of Rei and Jadeite, I really, really, really like what you\'ve done with them. You don\'t turn Rei into a shrieking, bitchy harpy and you don\'t fall back on the natural conventions placed on Jadeite\'s character in fanfiction (prankster). I mean, I can see elements of Rei\'s temper and Jade\'s funlovingness\' (is that a word?) but they aren\'t caricatures, so kudos! Now this has gone on way too long, so I shall stop. Hope to see more in the future. :)
Anyways. Good job! The writing is clean and easy to read; there are some minor technical errors and a few strange word choices, but maybe that\'s just me. I think there is a real strength in the way you portray the maturity (and not sexually, but that also) of the characters instead of them being stupidly innocent. Rei is going after what she wants instead of waffling and, hey, I can appreciate that. Yes, and on the subject of Rei and Jadeite, I really, really, really like what you\'ve done with them. You don\'t turn Rei into a shrieking, bitchy harpy and you don\'t fall back on the natural conventions placed on Jadeite\'s character in fanfiction (prankster). I mean, I can see elements of Rei\'s temper and Jade\'s funlovingness\' (is that a word?) but they aren\'t caricatures, so kudos! Now this has gone on way too long, so I shall stop. Hope to see more in the future. :)
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. You are doing a wonderful job writing this story and keeping all the characters in character.