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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
Mockingbird you've got some serious talent, I'd be hardpressed to find good Gravi fanfiction that focuses as much on the emotional elements of the characters instead of just the good ole' yaoi.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease keep writing. I'll bookmark your author page if you do! >=D
- Misery Arian
Mockingbird you've got some serious talent, I'd be hardpressed to find good Gravi fanfiction that focuses as much on the emotional elements of the characters instead of just the good ole' yaoi.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease keep writing. I'll bookmark your author page if you do! >=D
- Misery Arian
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh the unbelievable angst!! Loved it
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good use of language, great job at keeping them in-character, alright plot, and an ending that demands a continuation. :)
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing... you should write more Gravitation fan fics... wow... just wow
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@_@ was that the end? >>;?
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it yet HATED IT! plese please please please please! write another chapter one of yuki comming back yuki would never EVER leave shuichi no matter his past yesh sometimes yuki would say he wanted shuichi to leave but that was his barrier to keep shuichi from hurrting but he relaized that he couldnt push shuichi away so you have to make him come back or ill make another chapter for you!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was good, though the style needs work. You\'ve turned \"for long minutes\" into a cliche that had me cringing by the end.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was very well written! And so exciting to read! I have only the first 4 mangas of Gravitation *the rest haven\'t been released in English yet* and I had to go out and buy the anime; so I don\'t know how true the anime is with the manga. I hope, even though they left the anime unconcluded, that Eiri was going back to Japan to be with Shuichi *I hope*. This is a great fic; keep writing! Sara-sama
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wow,there are no other words to describe, such a delightful story!
And, I can just imagine. And you\'re right the anime does not show Yuki\'s fury towards what
happened to Shu-kun! Really, great it was one of the best!
LATER...
And, I can just imagine. And you\'re right the anime does not show Yuki\'s fury towards what
happened to Shu-kun! Really, great it was one of the best!
LATER...
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful! Touching... Please write more! ^___^
~dna
~dna