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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good, way to short though and you kept switching calling that girl Rosie to Mindy constantly. but still nice!
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June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY! Nice first OLS story... loved the interaction between Mel and Gene! Mel seemed a little grown up, but I know that\'s what you were trying to do with the story :) Gene was well done... ;) The Gene/Jim parts were GREAT. Anyway, Great Story, keep up the writing!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story and the quality of writing is very good the only complaint is melfina not losing her virginity to gene
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September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw...::Starry-eyed and hearts floating in the air around her head:: The ending was so sweet that I could have made marshmallows out of it. As my friend once said to me \"There is no better ending, then an ending chalked full of FLUFF!!\". Though there are some endings that are too mushy even for me, this one was great. Melfina was greatly OOC character in the beginning, but in its own special way it added to the fluffiness of the ending. Great job and please continue to write wonderfull fanfics.
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August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whos Genex?
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I remember readinis ais at fanfiction.net way back when. I\'d almost forgotten how much I love it. ^_^ The story is terrific; along with the beautiful Gene/Melfina romance, it was wonderful to watch Mel grow more confident and assertive. You did a good job making it very descriptive, too.
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was happy to see another GenexMelfina fic on this site. This is one of the better ones. The story was good, the characterizations were good - especially of Melfina. The writing was generally good, but the sentancructructures could use more polish - they tended to run on and be kinda long winded, better to cut them into sentances.