rate_review Reviews

the author is a fucking retard. the "story" isn't even really a PWP, it's disjointed and idiotic and beyond pointless with more of the usual "anyone in pleasure bites their lip so hard they draw blood, doesn't everyone?" type bullshit that makes for unbearably bad "sex". ugh. good grief. -_- sucks.

1. Spell check. Or get a Beta. You might be one of those people that can never find your own spelling/grammer mistakes cause your mind automatically makes them right, but please. Do get someone to check everything over.
2. Well done on the lemon. Not bad for your first time. Try to add a little more spice in there and you got it.
3. ...Theres a 3? oh yea. Well done.
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