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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!THAT JUST BLOW ME AWAY!!!!!!!!.Your fic was awesome,the way you made the scans so visual..both physicaly and mentaly...As I read it was as if i could feel what they were feeling.Also the way you made the ending laps with the way it beagn was so perfect.^__^I love Shuldich/Nagi fics,and finding one so WELL DONE AS THIS ONE IS GREAT!!!HOPE YOU KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this sure was different. your schuldig was, and so were all of the characters. not the way they are usually portrayed and it was... refreshing. i loved your characterisation and writing. i'm not too into the true love thing, but you managed to write what love could be loke to schuldig very well and it was believable. it kept me entertained and interested, and your hot scenes were exceptionally yummy. good work!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It\'s so powerful. The ending just sent shivers down my spine.
I really enjoyed reading this. I think you characterized everyone very well, and the plot was amazing.
I really enjoyed reading this. I think you characterized everyone very well, and the plot was amazing.
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wowee.....that was .....um.....I WANT to say sweet but I keep getting a mental picture of the throats *shudder* so I’ll settle for really really cool! YAY!!!^^
I love dark, twisted stories and this one was a good\'en! plus it had a bitter-sweet type ending where everyone lives kinda happy ever after! my fav!!!
Well written, great characters ( Shu\'s got just the right amount of arrogant selfishness and childishness to be in-character ish and interesting!) and I loooove the ending! innards suc such nice presents!
thanx for a great story!
Sio xxx
I love dark, twisted stories and this one was a good\'en! plus it had a bitter-sweet type ending where everyone lives kinda happy ever after! my fav!!!
Well written, great characters ( Shu\'s got just the right amount of arrogant selfishness and childishness to be in-character ish and interesting!) and I loooove the ending! innards suc such nice presents!
thanx for a great story!
Sio xxx
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was, well, it was amazing. That\'s all I can say, amazing. So clear and compact. No loose ends, like poetry. I\'ve been glued to the screen for two hours. Reading it over, becoming convinced that I loved it. I loved it because of the great incharacer at first and after the first chapter, I loved it for the story. This is an examplary of good writing. All I can do is congratulate you. After all the bad fics I\'ve rad, this has me believing in fanfiction -in good yaoi fanfiction- again. Your imagery is beautiful.
I know I\'m using a lot of big words in this review, it just reflects how I feel right now. At some point I just sttopped thinking about grammar, writing or the flow of words, and was consumed by this work of fiction. Great job. You\'re a powerful writer, use it to your advantage in the future. You must have enjoyed writing this. It felt so calculated, a pleasure to read. You rarely get all that wonderful twisted turn of events that surround the personalities of these characters. You did great on that. And you didn\'t rush the plot. And the sex was good. Snazzy ^^.
Honestly, you entertained me. That can be seen as an accomplishment nowadays. You\'ve obviously worked on the characters. You keep that up in all your writing, and you can do wonders. It really does pay off. This fic stood out from the mass, congratulations, you have made a fan. Good night for now.
Ps. And thanks for noticing that fan/boy/boy japanese is a bad thing.
Keep it up. And I\'ll surely read more. ^^
I know I\'m using a lot of big words in this review, it just reflects how I feel right now. At some point I just sttopped thinking about grammar, writing or the flow of words, and was consumed by this work of fiction. Great job. You\'re a powerful writer, use it to your advantage in the future. You must have enjoyed writing this. It felt so calculated, a pleasure to read. You rarely get all that wonderful twisted turn of events that surround the personalities of these characters. You did great on that. And you didn\'t rush the plot. And the sex was good. Snazzy ^^.
Honestly, you entertained me. That can be seen as an accomplishment nowadays. You\'ve obviously worked on the characters. You keep that up in all your writing, and you can do wonders. It really does pay off. This fic stood out from the mass, congratulations, you have made a fan. Good night for now.
Ps. And thanks for noticing that fan/boy/boy japanese is a bad thing.
Keep it up. And I\'ll surely read more. ^^
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this, you\'re rapidly saving my shitty day. I have to admit that I\'m a whore for this fic already. I just took this little break to tell you that. I\'m gonna rape thxt cxt chapter with *my* mind right now. This istingting really good [>\'\']>P THe pr0n flag is up and I\'m a\'running. ^^
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. What a beautiful story! I really enjoyed the way you captured the characters... You have a real gift for story-telling. Write again, soon!
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August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really really enjoyed this fic ^_^ Beautiful, how you made it work. Great great job! ^_^ *glomps nagi-kun*
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Wonderful. Wonderful.
I\'ve just spent the last hour reading your fic, and I don\'t know what I should comment on first. Every aspect of this fic was oustanding. The continuous moves and counter-moves of what was spoken versus what was thought were skilfully choreographed. The character\'s inner monologues were accurate and poetic. The lemon scenes were wildly sensual and creative; it was amazing how you used the written word to convey all 5 senses and make these moments seem multi-dimensional and truly alive. I\'ve never ano another author make such memorable use of Schwarz\'s space room, or integrate it into the plot as well as you did. As an aspiring writer, I\'ve learned a tremendous amount from this single work.
Also, you reminded me of the exact reasons why I fell in love with WK in the first place, and why it will always hold the largest spot in my heart. It\'s a series that\'s disappointing in many aspects (tossing away memorable characters, poorly-drawn animation sequences, etc.) but WK also has an inner beauty and spirituality that no other series can touch. This fic expressed all those qualities that make WK great, and so much more.
You should be extremely proud of this work. There are a few fics out there that everyone has read, or heard of, and I predict that \"Never White\" will become one of them. Congratulations, and I look forward to reading your other fics! -Psy
I\'ve just spent the last hour reading your fic, and I don\'t know what I should comment on first. Every aspect of this fic was oustanding. The continuous moves and counter-moves of what was spoken versus what was thought were skilfully choreographed. The character\'s inner monologues were accurate and poetic. The lemon scenes were wildly sensual and creative; it was amazing how you used the written word to convey all 5 senses and make these moments seem multi-dimensional and truly alive. I\'ve never ano another author make such memorable use of Schwarz\'s space room, or integrate it into the plot as well as you did. As an aspiring writer, I\'ve learned a tremendous amount from this single work.
Also, you reminded me of the exact reasons why I fell in love with WK in the first place, and why it will always hold the largest spot in my heart. It\'s a series that\'s disappointing in many aspects (tossing away memorable characters, poorly-drawn animation sequences, etc.) but WK also has an inner beauty and spirituality that no other series can touch. This fic expressed all those qualities that make WK great, and so much more.
You should be extremely proud of this work. There are a few fics out there that everyone has read, or heard of, and I predict that \"Never White\" will become one of them. Congratulations, and I look forward to reading your other fics! -Psy