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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's some weird errors that might have happened in moving the files or something--it would be nice if you could clean this up a little. I like it, I hope some day you add a chapter or two. Dee's outfit sounds really hot--I like the way you have Ryo unable to resist. Thanks for sharing!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, this is a really interesting set up for a story. I\'m really curious as to what Dee\'s thing IS, if he\'s not a cop. There are some spelling and grammar issues, but for the most part it\'s very engaging. I was pulled right in and now will probably have to suffer as it appears you may have abandoned the story. So sad.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I thought it was good. So there. :D
Another chapter? Soon?
Another chapter? Soon?
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!! >.< Such a cool story! You MUST continue!!
T.T I want to know what happens next!!
This story has a majorly cool plot and I really want to know who Ryo was dancing with!!
>< Come on! Your story was great and if you make a second chappy I\'ll be sure to review. ;D
T.T I want to know what happens next!!
This story has a majorly cool plot and I really want to know who Ryo was dancing with!!
>< Come on! Your story was great and if you make a second chappy I\'ll be sure to review. ;D
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who said it sucked? I\'m gonna kick his/hers ass for it! It was good, only some parts were odd, but don\'t worry, there weren\'t story-ruining!
All in all and shorted for you: I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All in all and shorted for you: I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like this! No, it did not suck! This is a good beginning and I bet it would make a awesome fic...IF you choose to continue it, that is. Well, I loved it, so yeah! It leaves ya wondering, which is not usual for fics, which is good. ^^
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Whimpers* Hey, why don\'t you update anymore? I\'ve been waiting paciently for the next chapter. Please update, i wanna find out what happens.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought the first chapter was very good. you have a nice way of explaining things in detail. Please write more!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go to animenation.com I got the second dvd there.
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i lov it i love it io love it please write more i was so drawn into it i want to know what happenes to ryo. as you can tell by my name i was dupped Dee from fake and my best friend is ryo and my other best friend is rose. it suites us all 3 of us are girls and the fact that my best friend is ryo is perfect cause i like her and that my friend is rose is good cause she likes her too. so its funny and perfect.
well keep writing and if you need a good idea try a Dee/Ryo/Rose one those are always good.
well keep writing and if you need a good idea try a Dee/Ryo/Rose one those are always good.