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for Learning to Trust Again

by Bekaspake

person Dark.moon.princess
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I think you are a very talented writer and I hope to hear more of your SM stories and more about Kafir!! Great idea with the soliders by the way!! ~*~Dark.moon.princess~*~
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Slippery Liz
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honey, darling, dearest, person whom I hope to never meet in real life; ignoring everything else that is wrong with this story(I won't start), the warrior of Saturn is female. Only one starseed is associated with any one heavenly body, and the starseed associated with the planet Saturn is a Sailor Crystal. Only female persons can possess Sailor Crystals and thus be sailor senshi, therefore, the warrior of Saturn, no matter how many times killed and reborn, would be female and singular.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person deep serenity
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok read all, Likes: the whole moon kindgom story and flash backs,
the whole brother and male scouts

You had me rolling with laughter at Darien with gun scene LMAO but I felt it was good to see him for once with real emotion. That is why I always felt Seiya was better (or even your char) for her Darien was always so laid back(slightly wimpy too) so it was good to see him snap!

GOod story line, creative I am glad I took time to read it.
person Deep Serenity
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, it moves a little fast but I like. I don\'t have a prob with Darien bashing, though I like him in general
I also like the whole Male scouts, they do exist and I wish there were more in stories.

Little confused about where her brother has been?????
but I plan to read last three chaps.
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! I like it! Good plot. I have just 1 question:

Why does everyone hate Mamoru? He is my 4th fave character!...Oh well...
person deep serenity
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must point out that no woman you beat that badly and raped by the MAN SHE WAS going to marry would be over it enough in three weeks to take a date no matter HOW nice someone was.

IF I ignore that, I thought the gifts were wonderful
person Moon_Daisuke
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was beautiful. Strange in a way but Beautiful just the same.Wow Keep up the fantastic work. I just read all 8 chapters in one sitting and I am
blown away!

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