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for Flowing Tears

by Sesshai

person McNinja
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two new chapters, and not surprisingly, they suck even worse than the previous two. Please kill yourself, mkay?
person McNinja
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And another thing: Everyone who\'ve given this \"story\" of yours a positive review is a fucking moron.
person CybrEmly01
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a decent y. y. (I\'m all gushy, YUCK! lol)

Don\'t let the nay-sayers get ya down. If they\'re all that wonderful, where are their fics?
(small rant) Huh? Where? Where, tell me? Where, huh?

*deep breath, slow exhale* Okay, better now.

Update soon please.

Ja,
CybrEmly01
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
o yea sano\'s dead
person Naomie
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. u updated! YAY! lol i liked this chapter i wish it had been longer. But itso k. I cant wait for the next!
person fish
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*does boogy*
ALRIGHT!! YOU UPDATED!! WOOT!!!
ok..now all you need to do is Update Again!!! HAHAHAHA!!!!
please update real soon!! and e-mail me!! I would really like to talk to you!!
person Rurouni_Agra and Yami Kitsune
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami Kitsune: You do realise you have two chapter 3\'s, right?

Rurouni_agra: Be nice, Yami, and tell how much you\'re enjoying the fic. I love it so far. Stupid Sano! Why\'d he go and do that?

Yami Kitsune: Well I like Sano as a rapist.

Rurouni_agra: You\'re NOT serious.

Yami Kitsune: Well, it\'s an idea I\'ve never seen before and you know I\'m a sucker for Karou/Sano fics anyway. 2pnts for originality.

Rurouni_agra: Well, I hope he had a reason. Was he drunk or something?

Yami Kitsune: Well we\'ll just have to wait for more chapters. And if we don\'t get them soon, I\'ll throw tea bags at the author.

Rurouni_agra: Tea bags? Oh well. Please write some more chapters. We really want to know what\'s going to happen.
person Cila
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Today my math teacher told me that every time we need to say something mean we should say something nice to balance it out.

Nice thing: Wow, you got a lot of guts posting this.

Bad thing: You need it when you\'re writing is like this. For some odd reason (and I\'m not saying this to be mean, it\'s just my opinion) that you write like someone ben thn the ages of 11 and 13. Your capitalization is off, you have spelling and grammer mistakes running rampant and you have little to no characterization. It amazes me that you have over 20 reviews when bet better fics I\'ve read have next to none. I\'m guessing you personally know them.

Sorry to sound mean (like it\'s really gonna do anything to scar you for life) but it\'s what I think. You need to improve seriously before I\'ll gave your stories a chance again.
person Yue
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lol... You know what I want to say but I can\'t say it because... I am me... ^_^ Well, Sesshai-chan I hope you update soon so that you can type in the part I am awaiting! And for all other reviewers, I AM THE AUTHORESS\'S FRIEND!!! I HAVE THE INSIDE INFORMATION!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! chu~ -Yue ^_~
person Fishy-chan
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*bashes head against desk*
WHY WON\'T YOu UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!?!?
*cries*
Please Update really Really Soon!!!

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