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August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grabs nearest person and holds sword to their head*
CONTINUE THIS OR THIS PERSON GETS IT!!!
*realizes sword is still sheated*
Dag Nabbit!! Just a Sec.
*victim runs away*
HEY!!!! GET BACK HERE!!!
*ponts to you*
There better be anither chapter by the time a get back!!
*runs after victim*
CONTINUE THIS OR THIS PERSON GETS IT!!!
*realizes sword is still sheated*
Dag Nabbit!! Just a Sec.
*victim runs away*
HEY!!!! GET BACK HERE!!!
*ponts to you*
There better be anither chapter by the time a get back!!
*runs after victim*
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*pulls out sword and holds it to your throat*
SIT DOWN!
*sits you in front of computer*
Now Write More of tHis Excellent Story!
*puts sword away and does puppy-dog eyes*
PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE????
SIT DOWN!
*sits you in front of computer*
Now Write More of tHis Excellent Story!
*puts sword away and does puppy-dog eyes*
PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE????
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You do Now that I\'m going to keep bugging you until you finish this story, ne?
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please Update This Story really Soon!!
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August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ignore All tHe Jerks Who Are dissing this Story!
Please Write More Soon...I really want to know what happens!!
Please Write More Soon...I really want to know what happens!!
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was very good so far i really hope you will update this soon! PLEASE E-mail me when you do because i am not mbermber of this site. if you tell me i will review thx i really apprciate it!! SummerNAngel@yahoo.com
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For god\'s sake!! Pick a tense (, pr, present, future) and a POV (Kenshin or Kaoru) and freaking stick with it!!! Your story is a horrible hodgepodge of tenses and POV\'s and none of it makes sense. You need a total rewrite in order to make this story even mildly presentable. What are you, ten years old? Actually, I\'ve sen ten year-old\'s write better than this!! Blah!! \"Rurouni Kenshin\" deserves better fan fic than this crap.
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...Please kill yourself slowly and painfully.
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...*is outraged* SANO YOU BASTARD!!!! I HOPE KENSHIN GUTS YOU GOOD FOR THAT!!!!